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The very core of your writing whilst sounding agreeable in the beginning, did not sit very well with me after some time. Somewhere throughout the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer unfortunately just for a while. I however have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do nicely to fill in those breaks. In the event you can accomplish that, I would undoubtedly be impressed.